Demo Reviews Vol. 5



Hello everyone. It’s that time again. The time where I listen to songs you sent me and give my honest opinion on them. Prior to sending these, you were all warned of how I may or may not feel about your music so, as always, take it with a grain of salt. Thick skin is important for musicians anyway. I’d also like to clarify, when I compare you to an artist, it’s more just my brain being reminded of something. It doesn’t mean you sound a lot like said artist. It’s a feeling. So don’t get offended or gassed of those type of comments. They’re just me telling you what I hear.
Also, DO NOT SEND ME MORE DEMOS. I’ll let you know when I need more. Anything sent to me now won’t even be opened or listened to.
Anyway, we’ve done this 4 times already so I don’t think I need to explain it that deeply. Aside from a brief written review, I’ll be rating the songs on a scale of 1-10 in these categories:
Originality: Obviously rating how much this differs from other music out there in a positive way. I’ll be shocked if anyone gets above a 5 out of 10 as this is a pretty tough category.
Listenability: Rating how hard/easy it was to sit through. This could go a few ways as I often find humor in music that’s extra bad so, it’s not always a compliment.
Production technique: Rating how well crafted the song was. Was it “professional”. How was it recorded and mixed.
Okay? cool. Let’s go…

Artist: GDP
Song:Quintuplets

This beat sounds like a cutting room floor late Company Flow track. Like a lesser version of this:

It’s definitely got a mood I’m familiar with but I’ve never really loved these types of tracks. That said, it’s well made for what it is and this is totally just a personal preference thing. I’m just not typically into noisy , chaotic beats. It’s ironic cause the rapper kinda sounds like Big Juss. He’s actually pretty dope. Good presence and the lyrics aren’t typical. Not bad at all.
(on a side note, I just listened to a bunch of his other songs on youtube and he’s dope. Kinda wish he had sent me a different song but, in general, easily one of the better rappers I’ve had submitted to me thus far)
Originality:6 out of 10
Listenability: 5 out of 10 (woulda been way higher if not for the track)
Production technique: 6 out of 10

Artist: Anthemous
song: Steal this tour

http://www.sharebeast.com/obhhn7vgsebs

I like this beat a lot. It’s got a really nice feel to it. The rapper is simply okay though. He’s mixed a little low so it’s hard to hear what he’s saying at times but when I can hear it , he’s adequate yet not really saying anything I haven’t heard a hundred times…and did he say “You gotta be def dumb and blind not to gay me”? I doubt it…but that’s what it sounded like.

Originality:4 out 10
listenability: 6 out of 10
Production technique:4 out of 10 (dope beat, shitty mix)

Artist: Broken Clock
Song: Could Mould

http://soundcloud.com/drewzle/broken-clock-could-mould

Pretty amateur sounding in both the sounds used and the composition. Maybe it’s just me but I can always tell when someones getting their sounds from some Reason (or whatever program) plug in. Nothing wrong with using those sounds but you gotta try and make them sound different from how the original factory settings. This has a few decent moments (there is a decent attention to detail with tiny things that pop in and out through the song) but it’s just not that interesting.

Originality:4 out of 10
Listenability:4 out of 10
Production technique:3 out of 10

Artist: Profen
Song: Party Pants

http://soundcloud.com/profen/party-pants-1

File this under: Proficient white rapper that I’d never listen to. It’s not bad, it’s just not up my alley. The writing and flow are actually pretty good but I’m just not crazy about the voice. It’s sounds like there’s too much spit in his mouth or something. Regardless, he’s not bad. I can appreciate when rappers try to do something topically so this has that going for it as well.
The beat is okay. Kinda boring but not terrible by any means.

Originality: 4 out of 10
listenability: 4.5 out of 10
Production technique: 5 out of 10

Artist: Anagraphs
Song:Introfucntion

http://anagraphs.bandcamp.com/track/introfunction

This is fine for what it is. Good drums with synth sounds. Not much really to grab on to here though. It’s just sort of like listening to a strange mood. Over all, this is simply okay. It’s not the type of shit I tend to listen to though so it’s kinda just like “um…okay…cool”.
That said, it is well made and has a subtlety to it.
Honestly, the most offensive thing about it is the genre tags on the bandcamp page. What the fuck is “Intergalactic soap house”?
Even if it’s two separate things, fuck that shit.

Originality: 4 out of 10
Listenability:4.5 out of 10
Production technique:5.5 out of 10

Artist: Kashiz
Song:101202 drumz

http://soundcloud.com/kashiz/kashiz-101202-drumz

I gotta admit, anytime I see an obviously european made song that spells the plural of a word with an unnecessary “z”, I tend to prejudge it. Before even listening to it, I imagine some whigger from norway quoting Vinnie Paz lyrics and wearing a t-shirt with a graffiti can on it.
All that said, this isn’t what I expected. It’s simply a beat…a beat that could use some vocals on it that aren’t movie clips from whatever country this is from. The beat itself is okay. It would be greatly improved by a rapper and definitely doesn’t stand alone but it’s solid for what it is.

Originality:3 out 10
Listenability:4 out of 10
Production technique:4.5 out of 10

Artist: Alex Kish
Song: Synchronized Buddha

http://soundcloud.com/alexkish/synchronizedbuddha

Well, that was brief. This was the beginning of something could have been pretty good. All the parts were cool, the changes worked but then it ended. This is a case of something simply not being finished. I’d advise this dude to reload this one up , add about 2 or 3 more minutes to it and you may be on to something. I feel like this is a case of a producer seeing his chance to send me something and not really considering that, perhaps, I wanna hear whole songs and not just snippets.

Originality:4.5 out of 10
Listenability:6 out 10
production technique:5.5 out of 10

Artist:Eli Wilson
song:On the tin hill

http://soundcloud.com/eli-wilson/on-the-tin-hill

It’s strange to say but my favorite part about this whole song is the snare that sounds like it may have been a field recording. It’s really cool. Other than that, this is just sorta all over the place. I don’t see a clear direction here. tone-wise, not everything melds together like I would have liked it to, as it’s basically just some abstract atmospheric type shit that pretty much relies on things blending seamlessly to carry on the mood.

Originality:4 out of 10
Listenability:3.5 out of 10
Production technique: 5.5 out of 10

Artist: Zeitgeist
Song: Blowin’ Smoke at the stars

http://soundcloud.com/zeitgeistrva/blowing-smoke-to-the-stars

This beat is very smooth. Reminds me of some mid/late 90’s underground kinda shit.Very solid. The rapping just isn’t there though. It just doesn’t sound like he’s really comfortable or that he’s found his style/voice yet. It borders on some spaced spoken word poetry type flow but it just doesn’t land well. It’s a very minimalist type of flow…too much so. Kind of “Group home” like but without the whole thugged out from brooklyn part that made then so enjoyable.

Originality:3 out of 10
Listenability: 5 out of 10 (the beat is EXTREMELY listenable)
Production technique:6.5 out of 10

Artist: Chuck brown
Song: Fear and Loathing

http://soundcloud.com/chuck-brown-ny/fear-and-loathing-intro

This is a tough one cause how you gonna rock over that Jay electronica beat? That’s some big shoes to fill considering how hard he murdered that track.

It doesn’t really give me a lot to work with. The rapper? He’s fine. Totally capable and not spectacular…but fine. I’m always gonna appreciate some straight NY shit, which this is but it’s just not really doing anything that hasn’t been done to death. Honestly, had this had an original beat on it, it would have helped me have a clearer opinion on it.

Originality:2 out of 10 (it’s not an original beat)
listenability:5 out of 10
production technique:3 out of 10

Now, you tell me what you think:

13 thoughts on “Demo Reviews Vol. 5

  1. I feel like somebody who isn’t GDP sent you that track. GDP is the man right now. He’s on division east (which I thought was dead after copy and cage left) but its back! He gets down with slang corp and tame UNO. There is some really golden songs on that album so I don’t understand why that dude sent you quintuplets when there’s tracks like social enema or someday when things are good. I’m leaving this link for redemption purposes http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XmdtSMe5rsU&feature=youtube_gdata_player

    • I think his producer may have sent it. regardless, I added on a little thing at the end about how I peeped his other stuff and it was dope. That dude can definitely rap. The beat was easily the worst part of that song.

    • Ur not thinking eastern conference are ya. That being said this is the gdp cat from new jersey right? Dude can rap for sure.

      Selfischarles

      • According to Google results, he’s from Jersey.And yes, Dude can definately rap! . . That’s actually what google said when i typed it in “GDP- This dude can RAP!”

      • yeah division east (GDP) is a different gang from eastern conference (Cage, Copy, etc) both have had collabs with Tame One though…

  2. I seriously feel like I’ve heard that 2nd songs beat before. Maybe someone else sampled the song, but that shits super familiar.

  3. couldn’t make it through all the songs to be able to review them.. i finished at Alex Kish.. honestly, man, are you just helping the little guy by keeping the reputable shi* from surfacing, or digging deep to help the up and coming? in that regard, i’ll keep my mouth shut for not producing anything close to listenable myself, and leave it to someone qualified. big ups to Alex Kish for his track Temper (available for listen on soundcloud)… reminds me of the joy i’d get from Bonobo and Blockhead! hehe

  4. i prefer to be genre-less, i put those silly names on there because it’s what the full albums remind me of. soap bubbling out of a house or being in space or some weird shit. i’m sorry you were offended by them. nonetheless thanks for the review. almost makes me wonder what you would think of my newer stuff since that was the first song i ever made. i listen to everything from black metal to jazz to electronic shit. for just starting a year ago i think as time passes i will define my sound. peace

  5. I’ve been listening to GDP for close to seven years now and every project he puts out is crazy! He’s got such an original sound(actually all of Slangcorp do. Especially The Man From Somewhere Else TMFSE). True punk feel to hiphop. No idea how he hasn’t gotten way bigger.

  6. lol late to the party here but I produced that GDP joint, defs didn’t send to you or anyone I’m too sheltered. and y’all shoulda hmu for yr aus tour, besides pluto supports be questionable for yr steez blocky 😉 peace. loved the review tbh. ❤

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